Scene Rewrite for Tension
By Avery Martinez · Published · Updated
Paste a scene where nothing much happens. Get one where something does.
Tags: Writing, Creative, Communication
Prompt template
The scene: [textarea: Paste it] What it has to accomplish: [textarea: Plot, character, or information it must deliver] What feels wrong: [dropdown: Boring, Nothing happens, Too much dialogue, Emotionally flat, Rushed, Too much explaining] POV and tense: [text: Whose head, past or present] Return: 1. Why the tension is missing. Usually nobody wants anything urgently, or nothing can go wrong. 2. What each character wants in this specific scene, and what stops them. 3. The first 200 words rewritten, in my voice rather than yours. 4. The changes to make through the rest, including what to cut.