Dialogue Polish Pass
By Nurul Rahman · Published · Updated
Make two characters sound like two people.
Tags: Writing, Creative, Communication
Prompt template
[textarea: Paste the exchange] Speakers, one line on each: [textarea: Who they are and how they talk] What each wants from this conversation: [textarea: Including what they will not say out loud] Problem: [dropdown: Everyone sounds identical, Too formal, Exposition dumping, Too on the nose, Just too long] Rewrite so each voice differs in rhythm, vocabulary, and in what they avoid saying. Cut the lines that exist for the reader rather than the listener. Let the important thing go unsaid and put the weight on subtext. Show me one place where a beat of action or silence does more work than a line would. Keep it sounding like my book.